I want to come to be able to use English
×I am happy in time when it takes for a long time on the phone with the lover.
○I am happy when I talk to my girlfriend on the phone for a long time.
To say "I am happy in time" sounds like your talking about music and being "in time" with the beat. To say "it takes for a long time" also doesn't make sense because you cannot take someone on the phone, but you can talk to them.
"Lover" is also rarely used here. The word implies someone who is there for sex. "Girlfriend" is someone you are dating and sounds better than "lover." Many people I know hate the word "lover."
"We live in a place away for a little while." makes sense, but it is not very clear. Are you living apart from eachother? Before did you live together? Or do you have a long distance relationship? See many things can be taken from that sentance.
○I am happy when I talk to my girlfriend on the phone for a long time.
To say "I am happy in time" sounds like your talking about music and being "in time" with the beat. To say "it takes for a long time" also doesn't make sense because you cannot take someone on the phone, but you can talk to them.
"Lover" is also rarely used here. The word implies someone who is there for sex. "Girlfriend" is someone you are dating and sounds better than "lover." Many people I know hate the word "lover."
"We live in a place away for a little while." makes sense, but it is not very clear. Are you living apart from eachother? Before did you live together? Or do you have a long distance relationship? See many things can be taken from that sentance.
